I suggest actually reading the ISU's criteria for components instead of using your own personal criteria.
I'll help. Via the ISU:
Zagitova's LP completely fulfills this criteria, and actually excels in several of these criteria (musical phrasing is superb, for example). So, no, via the ISU's rules, she should not get hit in components just because all seven jumping elements are in the second half of the program.
Obviously "witty" Pelletier isn't a fan, which is totally fine, but I will question the commentary when he misrepresents the rules to support his point.