Thank you, I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I rewrote Chapter 2. Trying to apply some lessons learned. NaNoWriMo looks interesting, but November is a bad month for me - I'll be at Skate America for a week. Also, this is really the only story I want to write. It's possibly going to be a series of books because I have so much material. I'll be working on this for quite awhile!